Friday, March 10, 2017

LW2W



      We just finished the long walk to water book. I thought the author ended the book really well.
I loved how the two stories came together, but hated all the time jumps.  I wonder why Salva's brothers dyed. I still don't understand why Uncle was killed. I was upset when Mariel died.  I thought one theme is that if you keep going thing will get better.

Thursday, February 23, 2017

Argument hooks

Claim- hockey is dangerous and people should not play it

Hook 1- Have you ever gotten injured in a sport? Did you know that hockey can cause very serious injuries?

Hook 2-  In the last four years 38% of hockey injuries were concussions.

Hook 3- The sports journalist Jim Murray said "Hockey is murder on ice."


Wednesday, February 15, 2017

Hello World




              My name is Amelia.  This is the blog I have wrote. I'm only making one because my teacher
       assigned us to make one. This will be interesting because I don't know what I am going to write.
       I hope the blog will turn out okay.